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Thoughts on my Prose?
eileen11
#1 Posted : Tuesday, August 23, 2011 1:16:19 AM(UTC)
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The clouds were black as the night sky when the first rain drops began to fall. The dull sounds of urban night were slowly drowned out by the melancholy percussion of the light drizzle, and the beat of the rain progressively gained momentum as the surreal patter atop the roofs began to crescendo. Thunder, ringing out like a disembodied timpani, accented the blistering pulse of the storm as lighting streaked the sky, refracting in the crystal bodies of rain drops, casting peculiar shadows upon the deserted city streets. Streetlights and shop windows became blurred by the incessant downpour, turning them into eerie neon spectres, slowly dancing to the storm’s intricate rhythm. The crumbling curbs of the sidewalk transformed into gurgling rivers of rain water and cigarette fags, slowly emptying out into lakes of oil and sewage forming on the roadside. Rain drops jettisoned from the blackened sky, relentlessly bombarding the cesspools, causing rings of sewage to radiate throughout the street. Bubbles, forming at the epicenter of the rings, slowly crawled down the rivers of waste, avoiding the perpetual rainfall only to explode at the confluence of gutters.


















































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